Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Apni tareef mein mai kya kahun...................................................





Apni tareef mein main kya kahoon
Koi pooche to kehna…
Ek shaqs hai bas, kuch khaas nahi

Ek lamha hai, kuch toota sa…
Ek darpan hai, kuch bikhra sa…
Ek parinda jis mein parwaaz nahi…
Apni tareef mein main kya kahoon
Koi pooche to kehna…
Ek yaad hai, bas kuch khaas nahi

Ek jhooth hai, thoda sachha sa…
Begana sahi, Kuch apna sa…
Saath rehkar bhi hamraah nahi…
Apni tareef mein main kya kahoon
Koi pooche to kehna…
Ek sawal hai, bas kuch khaas nahi…
Ek lafz hai, bemani – bematlab sa…
Ek raasta hai, bin manzil ka…
Ek dard hai, jiska ehsaas nahi…
Apni tareef mein main kya kahoon
Koi pooche to kehna…
Ek khayal hai, bas kuch khaas nahi…

Ek shola hai, bujhta hua…
Ek kinara hai, doobta hua…
Ek deep hai, bin jyoti ka…
Ek seep hai, bin moti ka…
Dard mein bhi hothon pe muskaan wohi…
Apni tareef mein main kya kahoon
Koi pooche to kehna…
Ek shaqs hai bas, kuch khaas nahi....

10 comments:

  1. Koi pooche ujhse toh keh dunga ek kaviyatri hey jiska likhna itna sacha hey...........koi pooche toh keh dunga mein iska bada shubhchintak hu...........koi puche toh keh dunga yeh ek hawa sa jhooka hey jo hume ehsaaa karne par majboor kar de............well written my frnd keep it up....well expressed.

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  2. As far as the poem is concerned, it's just so outstanding n realy well written, but my opinion on its relevance is, i dnt agree with any of it's word, n dats my opinion and observation, so you don't have any right to declare it wrong....
    Koi humse pooch kaun hai tu,
    Sirf kuch nhi par bhot khaas hai tu.
    Bhigi palkon se hasne ka, uss dard ka ehsaas hai tu,
    thoda anjaana par hai apnepan ki aas hai tu,
    Ek ladki batuni si, dil se saaf, bhot khaas hai tu ......

    Luv u d way u r, n dis is u r 4 me.....
    Samjhe.....

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  3. yar bahut jyada tareef likh di h tune toh
    itni mujhe hazam nai hogi

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  4. hey lovely, superb yaar.....
    n don't underestimate urself dear...u r "khas"...!!
    love urself...n keep remembering one dialouge...frm JAB WE MET....."me apni fvrt hu...".....:)

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  5. hm sai h
    u will see me as kareena 2morow

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  6. nice1 dear...tu toh chuparustam nikli....

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  7. are waah...kya sahi likha hai... waise hmari cutie -pie hai hi itni sweet tarif karo utni kum hai... love u

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  8. very good poetry, and you are also lovely. very good, keep it up

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  9. khoobsarat kavita..tareef-e-kabil!!

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